Draft talk:Winston Utomo
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Request for review of rewritten draft
[edit]Hello, I have rewritten this draft with improved sourcing and neutral tone. The article now relies on multiple independent secondary sources.
I would appreciate a review to assess whether it meets notability and Wikipedia content guidelines.
Thank you. Dinimaharani4403 (talk) 10:29, 18 December 2025 (UTC)
Request for review of rewritten draft
[edit]Hello, I have rewritten this draft with improved sourcing and neutral tone. The article now relies on multiple independent secondary sources. I would appreciate a review to assess whether it meets notability and Wikipedia content guidelines. Thank you. Marcella Anindita (talk) 08:53, 20 January 2026 (UTC)
Request for review of rewritten draft
[edit]Hi @Greenman! Hope you're doing well.
Thank you for the advice about the draft of Winston Utomo [English Version]. I have revised this draft to improve its neutral tone and encyclopedic style, and to rely on multiple independent, reliable secondary sources. I would appreciate a review to assess whether it meets Wikipedia’s notability and content guidelines. Thank you.
Best Regrads, Cella Marcella Anindita (talk) 04:42, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
Request for review of rewritten draft
[edit]Hello @Youshouldchooseausernamethat, I have revised this draft to address previous feedback by adopting a more encyclopedic tone, reducing résumé-style content, and relying on independent secondary sources. I would appreciate a review to assess whether it now meets Wikipedia’s notability and content guidelines. Thank you. Marcella Anindita (talk) 07:33, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Hello, could you specify which draft please. Thank you.
My apologies. I thought this was a user talk page as it appeared that way on my mobile view. Youshouldchooseausernamethat (Youshouldtalk) 20:54, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Request for review of rewritten draft: Winston Utomo
[edit]Hello @Youshouldchooseausernamethat @Greenman, I have revised this draft to address previous feedback by adopting a more encyclopedic tone, reducing résumé-style content, and relying on independent secondary sources. I would appreciate a review to assess whether it now meets Wikipedia’s notability and content guidelines. Thank you. Marcella Anindita (talk) 07:47, 25 March 2026 (UTC)
Request for Review of Rewritten Draft: Winston Utomo
[edit]Hello @SnowyRiver28, I have revised this draft to address previous feedback by adopting a more encyclopedic tone, reducing résumé-style content, and relying on independent secondary sources. I would appreciate a review to assess whether it now meets Wikipedia’s notability and content guidelines. Thank you. Marcella Anindita (talk) 01:47, 26 March 2026 (UTC)
- There seem to be few sources that are actually WP:SIGCOV of Utomo. Most of them are about IDN, though I concede I can only read the ones in english. Are you able to explain how the subject meets WP:NPERSON?
IDN currently has more than 70 million monthly active users across Indonesia and is now one of the biggest media and entertainment companies in Southeast Asia. Its impact has been widely recognized, disrupting the media and entertainment industry and changing how young Indonesians consume content.
Phrases such as this one are problematic as it's not really relevant to Utomo and seems highly promotional of IDN. Please also see WP:BOMBARD in regard to stacking numerous references that aren't really necessary. The paragraph I just quoted has 10 citations.- Do you have a close connection to or personal relationship with Utomo? SnowyRiver28 (talk) 02:18, 26 March 2026 (UTC)