Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 May 21
I'd appreciate feedback on form and content before going "live". Thanks
Architectsea (talk) 03:24, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- This draft looks just fine. Only issues I noticed were two typos I corrected (I hope you don't mind)
Thanks! (I see my default Canadian spelling re-emerged again) Architectsea (talk) 15:13, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
I created a userdraft article for the upcoming Disney series, and I was looking to see if additional information was required before this article could replace the currently-protected redirect page that brings readers to Sonny with a Chance.
68DANNY2 (talk) 00:28, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi Danny, seeing how an editor has already helped you move the page I am assuming that your current references prove notability. Just a few minor edits.
- You should probably try to format your references better; right now they are just bare URLs.
- Reread the article and give it a copy-edit. I saw a few grammatical and spelling errors that you should take care of.
Other than that, I don't see any problems. Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:50, 22 May 2011 (UTC)