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Latest comment: 1 year ago by OwenCompher in topic Problems with references

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By reading this article, it is obvious that it a lot of problems, particularly in the second part. I am no expert on the subject, so if someone can, edit it please Νικόλαος Δημήτριος Πούλος (talk) 13:48, 18 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Non-neutral tone

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To highlight the specific problem:

"Her role involved data integration with other remote telescopes, achieving a baseline of 10,000 kilometers and effectively simulating what a single telescope of such a large diameter would have been able to do." , the last line of the Activity section, reads like a resumé, but I'm not sure how to alter the tone without removing the information completely. Sorry-to-go-on (talk) 22:41, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

In my opinion it's redundant to keep it – it is a principle of VLBI which is already linked in previous sentence. (The distance is not even accurate) Slovborg (talk) 23:13, 16 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Problems with references

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not sure if More Footnotes Needed is the right tag here, but most of the existing footnotes don't actually include a lot of the info that needs citing. Some of the sources might but most of them are in Italian OwenCompher (talk) 04:16, 17 November 2024 (UTC)Reply