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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Feminist in topic Requested move 14 November 2018

Missing sources

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I marked a few sentences that were missing sources. The info was covered in press releases but I don't like using primary sources. I tried to source the Xgig with this: http://www.cbronline.com/news/telecoms/network/jdsu_to_acquire_network_tools_business_from_finisar_100709/, but it's apparently on a banned list of sources.Timtempleton (talk) 05:21, 1 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Tone

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This is mainly a problem with the products section. It is close being advertorial. Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 14:56, 7 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

Frayae - it's hard to describe a technology company's products for laymen without being overly verbose, but almost everything is sourced and I took pains to keep the language as neutral as possible. A second set of eyes is always welcome - feel free to cull anything you think has been written in too promotional a tone, or if it's easier, you can point out here what concerns you and I can rewrite the offending text. TimTempleton (talk) (cont) 23:19, 2 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
I did some copyediting and removed the tag. Overall it's neutral enough. Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 08:20, 3 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
Frayae Looks better - thanks for doing this. TimTempleton (talk) (cont) 14:48, 3 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Requested move 14 November 2018

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: not moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) feminist (talk) 16:43, 21 November 2018 (UTC)Reply


Viavi SolutionsVIAVI Solutions – On behalf of Shaycw. Crouch, Swale (talk) 15:53, 14 November 2018 (UTC)Reply


The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.