Talk:USS Chew

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC) I'll review this article.--Tomobe03 (talk) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

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• There's definitely something missing in After brief repairs at port in New York City, New York and refresher training at Guantanamo Bay Naval Base.
  • Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
• ... she visits to the Azores ... seems odd to me. I may be wrong, but perhaps "visited Azores" would be better.
  • Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
• There's also probably something missing in At the outbreak of the attacked Pearl Harbor by the Empire of Japan that morning ...
  • Fixed. —Ed!^(talk)
• There are several structures like ...arrived at Philadelphia 13 September. Is it possible to omit "on" before date here? I was under an impression it is not, but then again I'm not a native speaker of English, so I cannot be that sure.
  • You're right. Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

I made a few copyedits, including one I'd suggest you review (marked so in associated edit summary). Overall nice article, no MOS or referencing issues to speak of.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:23, 23 May 2013 (UTC)

• • Thank you for your review. I've made all of the fixes. —Ed!^(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

You're welcome. All clear.--Tomobe03 (talk) 22:19, 24 May 2013 (UTC)