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Latest comment: 13 years ago by DemonicPartyHat in topic Wording of opening paragragh

Wording of opening paragragh

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Hi, could the wording of the first paragragh before the contents box be re-worded please? There is one sentence with at least four commas in and it's very hard to read.

Many thanks

217.34.59.78 (talk) 12:29, 8 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

I've touched up the intro so as to make it more readable. — DemonicPartyHat talk 20:46, 6 May 2013 (UTC)Reply