Talk:Together When...
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:52, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Fantastic work!
Lead
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[edit]- "...is a song by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki." --> "...is a song recorded by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki."
Paragraph 2
[edit]- "An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which has Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette." --> "An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which displays Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette."
Background and release
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- What about: "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by CMJK," --> "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by musician CMJK,"
Reception
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[edit]- "A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labelling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki. The review also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]" --> "A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labeling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki; the reviewer also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]"
Music video
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[edit]- "The accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii." --> No source.
Promotion and live performances
[edit]- "The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up tour.[21]" --> "The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary Tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again Tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up Tour.[21]"
Charts and certifications
[edit]Monthly charts
[edit]- Did the single peak in 2007/08 or in 2016? The chart box reads 2016
End of GA Review:
[edit]A few changes, good luck! On hold for seven days. Thanks for the review! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:23, 28 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Done and dusted
CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 21:47, 28 June 2016 (UTC)