Talk:Tingin

Tingin article title

AdobongPogi, there is a Tingin title redirect to Cup of Joe. If you are agree to move it Tingin (song) → Tingin. ROY is WAR Talk! 05:06, 3 July 2025 (UTC)

Hello, yeah i just found out since no other articles share the same title. So i'm AGREE to move the article in a single name without the disambiguator. Also i have requested the move at 1. Thanks! AdobongPogi (talk) 05:57, 3 July 2025 (UTC)

GA review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tingin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: AdobongPogi (talk · contribs) 06:08, 21 July 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 February 2026 (UTC)

Infobox

• April 23, 2023 → body of the article and source
• Needs alt

The alt shows a woman among starts and the moon. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:46, 2 February 2026 (UTC)

 Done

Lead

• Remove first source as it is already present and quoted in the body of the article
• single by Filipino band Cup of Joe from their → single by Filipino band Cup of Joe featuring Janine Teñoso from their
• (brother of Raphaell) → relevant how? Not mentioned anywhere else in the article
• and Janine Teñoso who also featured the song. → and Janine Teñoso
• According to Teñoso...→ where is her quote on the article? Also, paraphrase
• It was released on April 28, 2023, through Viva Records. → two different release dates, which one?
• The song achieved strong streaming performance and debuted at number 25 on the Billboard Philippines Songs chart on October 27, 2023, marking both its first week on the chart and its peak position. Its entry contributed to a new milestone, with 17 Filipino acts charting simultaneously, breaking the previous record for the most local artists appearing on the chart at once → The song debuted at number 25 on the Billboard Philippines Songs chart on October 27, 2023, marking both its first week on the chart and its peak position. Its entry contributed to a new milestone, with 17 Filipino acts charting simultaneously.
• as of November 2023, the song had surpassed 22 million streams on Spotify. → remove
• several Spotify editorial playlists in the Philippines.[2] → source should be in the body of the article in appropriate section
• Needs to mention music video, live performances, awards, etc

 Done

Background and release

• After signing with Viva Records in mid-2019, → not mentioned in the article
• The EP includes a mix of new and previously released songs, such as "Patutunguhan" (2023) and "Wag Na Lang" (2023), along with earlier singles like "Tataya" (2023), "Estranghero" (2022), and "Mananatili" (2022). → trim this down, less songs, article about a song, not the EP
• of the extended play,[5] Patutunguhan Live Manila, held at Viva Cafe in Quezon City in September 2023 → I don't understand the sentence
• Followed by the release "Tataya", the single "Tingin" was released on April 28, 2023, collaboration with Janine Teñoso and later included as the opening track of Cup of Joe's debut EP Patutunguhan, which came out on June 30. → "Tingin" was released on April 28, 2023 and later included as the opening track of Cup of Joe's debut EP Patutunguhan, issued on June 30, 2023.
• Followed by her collaboration with Arthur Nery on "Pelikula" (lit. 'Movie') was released in 2021, Teñoso became a "chartbreaker" with "Tingin", along with the band → she didn't break the chart with Nery? If she didn't you can say this was both performers first chart entry

 Done

Composition and lyrics

• "Tingin" is an alternative pop[8] song featuring atmospheric and dreamy pop instrumentals[9] → "Tingin" is an alternative pop song featuring atmospheric and dreamy pop instrumentals.[8][9]
• featuring atmospheric and dreamy pop instrumental → use your own words and/or quotations marks
• with a length of three minutes and forty-two seconds long. → irrelevant, remove
• Redentor Ridao and Janine Teñoso → Redentor Ridao, Janine Teñoso and produced by?
• In Billboard Philippines, → Mayks Go writting for Billboard Philippines
• "stated that the lyrics depict the perspective of someone who, despite the chaos of the world around them, remains completely focused on the person they love, unaffected by any distractions" → copy paste (use your own words)
• The song was produced by Shadiel Chan → move up
• The whole second paragraph needs to be paraphrased

 Done

Music video

• ho also directed the music video for "Straydogs" by Felip, member of the Filipino boy band SB19 → is this in any way related to the song or artists of it?
• on Teñoso and Cup of Joe vocalists Gian Bernardino and Raphaell Ridao →on Teñoso, Gian Bernardino and Raphaell Ridao
• Gian Bernardino and Raphaell Ridao → should be mentioned as cup of joe vocalists in the background section

 Done

Live performances

• their chart-breaking single "Tingin" with the entire arena singing along → "Tingin" with the entire arena singing along

 Done

Commercial performance

• Cup of Joe's overall chart history → remove
• At the inauguration of the Official Philippines Chart...→ third paragraph (along with section below)

 Done

Reception

• It was also recognized by Apple Music Philippines → when?
• Merge with above section

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Instead of - → use  – (click to see the diference)

 Done

Charts

• Fine

Accolades

• Move to the reception section, without the table

 Done

References

• Fine

Overall

• A lot of "copy-paste" let's see if we can improve that.
• You have a work to do. Good luck, let me know when you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:05, 1 February 2026 (UTC)

  Hi @MarioSoulTruthFan, could you take a look at the edits I made to the article? I removed this part: "According to Teñoso, the song expresses the feeling of being captivated by someone's presence, where every moment shared is cherished and marked by the light they bring into each other's lives" ~ I originally got it from Genius, but the context it's no longer on their site (probably edited by a Genius user), and since it doesn't meet sourcing guidelines, I decided to remove it. Also, regarding the single's release date, I apologize for the mistake; the song was originally released on April 28, 2023 (see here). AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 09:38, 2 February 2026 (UTC)

  @AdobongPogi: Genius not a good source for that since is fan and user-generated. Secondly, who is Cup of Joe? This article doesn't tell me who are the members + source and you missed some stuff on the review, which I pointed out. Last, but not least I'm thinking about merging more section "Background and release + Composition and lyrics"; "Music video + Live performances" and "Commercial performance with Reception". since 3 lines per section is not enough. Thoughts? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:58, 2 February 2026 (UTC)

  It is good idea to make it expand some contexts per section, maybe I preferred this part:

  • Background and composition
  • Music video and promotion

  While in Credits and personnel part, I finished to fix. I removed the band name because it is redundant to readers. The band's individual members are already listed with their specific roles, so including the band as a whole duplicates information and is unnecessary. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 03:34, 3 February 2026 (UTC)

  I agreed with those sections, very well done. Credits and personnel just missing a little something that I left in the comments. All of them but Janine Teñoso are part of the band? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:03, 3 February 2026 (UTC)

  Janine Teñoso is not a member of the band. She is credited as a "featured" female vocalist and I was included her in the "Musicians" part because she performs on the song. This is meant to avoid any confusion or thinking for readers. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 23:18, 3 February 2026 (UTC)

  Good, but Gian Bernardino, Vixen Garez, Redentor Ridao and Raphaell Ridao are part of the band, correct? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:57, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  These three musicians (Gian Bernardino, Vixen Gareza, and Raphaell Ridao) are members of the band. Redentor Ridao is a songwriter and the brother of Raphaell; he is not part of the band but is a contributor to some of the band's singles and tracks. Im going to fix this. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 01:57, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  You got my point, someone from the outside who is reading the article and doesn't know who cup of joe is...they still won't know who cup of joe is when they finish the article. Maybe on the background and composition when the songwriters are list maybe say "Cup of Joe is consisting of X, Y and Z", even on the lead. They get that Janine is not part of the band...but what about the songwriters? is the producer involved, so...it gets confusing because there is no sentence say this. I tried something, see if it work. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 03:05, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  Maybe what I'm thinking is how to describe the performers and non-performers to fix the section. I'm planning to add a notelist (if possible) or fix the subheading since it can make the roles clearer which will make it easier to understand. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 03:34, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  There is no need to describe who performs and not. Cup of Joe is three guys. The song was written by X,Y,Z who are members of Cup of Joe...simple effective and straight to the point. You are trying to do too much, when the article needs and mostly important has to be simple MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 03:43, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  Are CJ and Xen part of the group or they are touring members? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 03:52, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  They are part of the band, which means they are official members. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 03:57, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  Is this section better and clearer? AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 03:59, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  Yes, you just need to use  – instead of what you have take a look here to find that. I have improved it elsewhere to reflect the reality, please take a look and see if you are ok with those changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:14, 4 February 2026 (UTC)

  I checked the changes per section, and everything looks good. Thanks for your contribs. AdobongPogi ^{masarap 🍛} 00:04, 5 February 2026 (UTC)

  Passing now. Good job! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:29, 5 February 2026 (UTC)