Talk:ThinkCentre

Added neutrality tag

This article sounds like advertising copy and not an encyclopedia article. It needs to be completely rewritten from an NPOV viewpoint. I have added the neutrality tag to it. DQweny (talk) 11:18, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

Hi. I've been working on a series of pages for the ThinkPad and IdeaPad product lines for a while now and have recently begun a draft of the ThinkCentre A Series desktops. I saw the neutrality tag and got a page ready to replace the content here. I'm going to be uploading it in a while and will appreciate a review and any editors letting me know if the new page is an improvement over the old one.

Trevor coelho (talk) 05:41, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

UPDATE - As indicated, I've updated the ThinkCentre page, and I'm putting a detailed description of the changes here.

• Changed the content on the ThinkCentre page and rewritten everything before the Features section.
• Used press releases from Lenovo and IBM as sources of reference.
• Removed as much of the marketing speak from the writing as possible.
• Removed the dead links from the External Links section.
• Retained the Features section because I don't have much information on it at the moment. I will, however, see if I can support the content in the section with relevant links or rewrite it as applicable.

Any feedback on the changes I've made would be welcome.

Trevor coelho (talk) 06:32, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Requested move

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The result of the move request was: page moved -- JHunterJ (talk) 14:41, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

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Lenovo ThinkCentre → ThinkCentre – There's only one trademark called ThinkCentre, so it's unnecessary to put "Lenovo" on the title. In addition, the article ThinkPad which introduce another Lenovo product has no "Lenovo" on its title. As a result, the world "Lenovo" on the title should be delected. --Jack No1 (talk) 09:46, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

• Comment since it was the IBM ThinkCentre first, there's the issue of IBM v Lenovo as well. 70.49.124.225 (talk) 04:42, 23 April 2012 (UTC)
• However, there isn't an article called "IBM ThinkCentre". In addition, the history of ThinkCentre can be written in this article regardless it's about IBM or Lenovo. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jack No1 (talk • contribs) 12:48, 26 April 2012 (UTC)

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