Talk:The Clinton Centre
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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Jxm in topic Needs updating and refining
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Needs updating and refining
[edit]The article uses a lot of temporal language like "his most recent visit" and "the plan will deliver". Assuming no objections, I'll do some text editing. Also, we should probably replace 'murdered ' with 'killed'. I think the convention is that murder is generally used only when referring to specific individuals, not to organizations. jxm (talk) 07:38, 15 February 2025 (UTC)