Talk:Terry Conroy

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:41, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• in a 14-year career in the Football League It may be helpful to give the years he was active in a (x–y) form here. Something similar may look good near a seven-year international career.
  • OK, done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• You can add "Irish club" before "Glentoran" as you have done for Waterford.
  • I'd say it's not needed as it goes on to say he won the Irish Cup and Irish League with Glentoran, but its up to you.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• distinctive appearance of pale skin and bright ginger hair and sideburns Maybe shorten this to "distinctive pale skin, bright ginger hair and sideburns"? (Also in "Style of play")
  • Ah good thinking.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• Does "insurance" need a link? (Also in "Personal life")
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Ireland

• When you begin with the main article, you should write the full name of the person
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• two jobs as a factory worker "...two jobs: as a factory worker..."
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• Does "housekeeping" need a link?
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• he was too small Too "young" if it refers to age, or "short" if it refers to height?
  • I'd say bulk would also be included, but probably mainly height.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Stoke City

• A few images would give this a more interesting look.
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• "Friendly" may be appropriately wikilinked.
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• more cartilage in his knees "from" and not "in", I think
  • Probably yeah.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• "John Mahoney" is a duplink
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Later career

• Name his autobiography
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

International career

• Both of these games...France finished third. Source?
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• Duplinks: Shamrock Rovers and XI, Lansdowne Road
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Style of play

• Italics for "Daily Express".
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
• "Victoria Ground" is a duplink, but linking it may be relevant here
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Personal life

• Begin section with "Conroy".
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Honours

• Source for the last point?
  • Done.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

No copyvio detected. Will check sources later. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:26, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

OK, thank you for the comments. I have found them useful.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, done with the above issues. Moving on to sources: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:19, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

• Assuming good faith for offline inaccessible sources.
• Page ranges for refs 1 and 11?
  • I've asked the guy with those books to add them.--EchetusXe 17:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
• I expect each point in the infobox is sourced, there or somewhere else in the article?
  • Yeah: birthplace and date, height, position, stats.--EchetusXe 17:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
• A note on the top of the section "International" saying ref 7 supports everything in it would be helpful, as in the preceding section.
  • Done.--EchetusXe 17:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
• It is better to name the publisher properly whenever you can, instead of using the website name. For example, you can say Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation instead of rsssf.com (ref 59)
  • Done.--EchetusXe 17:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Great, can be promoted now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:48, 11 June 2016 (UTC)