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Latest comment: 18 years ago by 81.146.14.239 in topic Cleanup needed

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This is a great article, well done to the editors. Anyone got a picture? It could do wiht one. Guy 13:16, 20 February 2006 (UTC)Reply

I own the original Wolf tenoroon which is referred to in the article. I've uploaded an image. Anybody with more Wikipedia-fu than I might find a way to make it smaller, or also to link to the rear view at Wolf-tenoroon-rear.jpeg. It would also be nice to see more description and some images of older instruments, particularly Savary, who made a surprising number. Groogle (talk) 02:27, 24 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

Cleanup needed

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Article tagged for cleanup. It's basically good, nicely informative, but:

  • The introduction reads like an essay, not an encyclopedia article, and should be rewritten.
  • Throughout, there are problems with grammar, punctuation, confusing passages, and capitalization.
  • Then there is the question of whether this article should appear under the title 'Tenoroon' at all. More than just tenoroons are discussed here. I believe it would make more sense to move it (with some consequent revision) to a new Bassoon family article, to which Tenoroon could redirect.

-- Rsholmes 16:43, 20 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

I took out a lot of bad grammar and re-worded some stuff all around, but it definatly still needs work. I agree it is a fairly good article, and I didnt take out the essential facts. Whoever wrote this article did a nice job with thier research! Ageofe 15:47, 22 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

I'd sure like to know who the author for this article is. I was responsible for commissioning the first Wolf Tenoroon, which I still own. It has the serial number of 1. What's shown in the photo seems to be a simplified prototype as mine has a full Heckel system keywork. The Tenoroon project with Wolf was written up in the British Double Reed society journal around 1990. Richard J Moore (richardj_moore@uk.ibm.com) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.146.14.239 (talk) 11:10, 20 June 2008 (UTC)Reply