Talk:Selma Freud

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Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

@WritingMan: This looks good. Some thoughts

Don't start with "widely but incorrectly considered", let the first sentence say who she was (Austrian, or Israeli physicist). Also leave Olga Steindler out of the lead - you already established that Freud wasn't first, if someone wants to know who was first, I think that's best left for the body of the article.
I don't love Baptized a Protestant, Selma Freud was... - it feels very German to me, I can hear the accent when I read it. I think it's better to start with Selma Freud was the daughter of... and mention her religion later. Is there some specific significance here? I could see that with the connection to the Salvation Army, but it feels a little disconnected.
Reading more, the construct of the translation is still very German. A lot of it needs to be re-written. It might be a bit early for feedback yet. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:11, 14 May 2019 (UTC)Reply