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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

Removing Books Project

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This article isn't about a book at all. Removing WikiProject book tag. --Kristabelle13 (talk) 23:58, 14 July 2015 (UTC)Reply

De-orphaned

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I just added two links, one from transfer of learning and on from E-learning.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Loftelon (talkcontribs) 04:36, 9 July 2015 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Seductive details/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:12, 9 November 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll be happy to take this review. JAGUAR  20:12, 9 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

Disambiguations: none found

Linkrot: none found.

Checking against GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    "are by definition: (1) interesting and (2) not directed toward" - listing points in the lead sounds informal
    "Recently, there have been many criticisms of this theory" - vague
    Two paragraphs in the The research section are unsourced
    "Because adults, on average, having a higher working memory capacity than children, adults are less affected by seductive details than children" - repetition of "adults"
    "When information is made easier to comprehend, material is processed less deeply, thus leading to poorer acquisition of information" - needs a citation
    References could be split into two columns
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    References check out OK, reliable sources, no evidence of OR
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
    Neutral
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    Stable, no edit warring
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    No images used
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Other than those minor points I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, so I'll pass it now. This article meets the GA criteria. Well done! JAGUAR  20:20, 9 November 2015 (UTC)Reply