Talk:Sarah Cooper/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• Birthdate needs a source.
• Here and in other sections, add a comma after "Sheets".

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

• Here and in other sections, change "lip syncing" and "lip synced" to "lip-syncing" and "lip-synced".

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Early life and education

• In the first reference, the Wayback Machine template isn't necessary or ideal to use since other references don't have it. May I suggest using "<ref>{{cite web|url=|title=|date=|first=|last=|website=|archive-url=|archive-date=|url-status=live|access-date=}}</ref>" this instead?
• Add a comma after "College Park".

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Career

• Remove the comma after "comedy in Atlanta".
• "of self-help book" → "of a self-help book"
• Remove the commas after "performing on TikTok" and "economical political satire".
• The Princess Bride should link to The Princess Bride (film).

• All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:51, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Publications

• This section looks good.

Filmography

• This section looks good.

Awards and nominations

• This section looks good.

References

• PEOPLE.com → People
• streamys.org → Streamy Awards
• Mark references from The New Yorker with "|url-access=registration".
• Mark references from Adweek with "|url-access=subscription".
• Mark references from Financial Times with "|url-access=subscription".
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vogue with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
• The two references after "the 2020 Democratic National Convention" are missing websites.
• The reference after the "Associated Press" should link to the source.

• Hopefully now all done, but let me know about any outstanding issues with these. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:52, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

@BennyOnTheLoose: Everything else looks good but her specific birthdate still needs a source. c (talk) 15:14, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for your constructive review, Some Dude From North Carolina. I've reached out to the co-nominator about the date of birth, as they may be able to resolve this more quickly than I can. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Some Dude From North Carolina - In the absence of a reliable source for Cooper's full date of birth being available, the article now just states her year of birth. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:59, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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