Talk:SMS Delphin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 July 2017 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I just have a few comments/queries:

• suggest mentioning that the guns were muzzle-loading if they were. I'm a bit unclear about when breech-loading guns were introduced
  • Good idea
• suggest linking Ceremonial ship launching
  • Done
• speed trails? trials?
  • Good catch
• suggest linking Reserve fleet for laid up
  • Done
• were too far away to take part
  • Fixed
• suggest linking ship commissioning at first mention of recommissioning
  • Done
• Friedrich Wilhelm is introduced, but then referred to as Frederick Wilhelm a couple of times, suggest consistency
  • Fixed
• the image is appropriately licensed.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:34, 22 July 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the fast review, PM. Parsecboy (talk) 10:12, 22 July 2017 (UTC)

No prob. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:16, 22 July 2017 (UTC)