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Thank you for following up. Respectfully, there is a tone in several statements that sound speculative or vague. I understand sourcing for this subject is likely limited, but there is room for improvement in how it is presented. For example:
"sometime between 1222 and 1224"
"he ceded some rights and lands to his uncle"
"It was probably the lord of Boves"
"He must have died in 1249"
It is my understanding this type of language should be avoided or at least, reworded to reflect an encyclopedic tone.
