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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Boneyard90 in topic Possibly?

Possibly?

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I wasn't sure about the term "possibly" in the Lead section, until I read further down. But then "Some sources" cites two works by the same author. Perhaps another source, or leading the sentence with "It is speculated..."? Also, a short paragraph, even a sentence or two, comparing the two projects could justify to the reader why the RIM-101 might have been a derivative project of RIM-7. Clear these up, and I'll come back with a "B"! Good luck! Boneyard90 (talk) 03:13, 31 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

I've changed "some sources" to "it has been...", and added a bit about the timing of RIM-101 vs the RIM-7 variants. Hope that helps! :) - The Bushranger One ping only 04:19, 31 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
And B-class it shall be! Boneyard90 (talk) 04:26, 31 January 2011 (UTC)Reply