Talk:R-Point

Editing

I just updated this article, I will finish the rest of tomorrow, please be patient.

The 'Plot' section should be a synopsis, not a step-by-step description of what happens. This article does need a lot of work, though. Geoff B 17:37, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

I don't think the content of the plot synopsis is the issue, but it is poorly written and incredibly hard to follow. Early on in the synopsis it says "Lt Jin returns", but never mentions him ever disappearing. The transmission where the men are told there were only ever 9 of them is completely absent, and then there's the final paragraph:

"The next morning, the rescue team finds Sergeant Jang alone but the bodies of all the other eight soldiers formerly along with Sergeant Jang are gone and all bloodsheds somehow vanish when the rescue team arrives."

....So does the rescue squad find Jang or not? "Formerly" is used incorrectly here and sounds very clunky, and "bloodsheds" isn't a word. It's just" bloodshed", singular. It's been too long since I watched this film to edit this incoherent thing, but I'm hoping someone else can. In the meantime I'll at least fix the numerous grammatical errors so it reads more cohesively. 2601:647:6400:D770:9AD:BBC9:D89D:CDBA (talk) 05:59, 9 March 2025 (UTC)

Ok I'll write a better one Pat 17:44, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

Still working on this, trying to get it to a class GA/A Pat 19:06, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

Rank discrepencies.

1st. Sgt. Jin indeed does not hold the "rank" of first sergeant (or sonimhasagwan, a title more than a rank) but is a 'jungsa,' or a Sergeant First Class. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.0.110.19 (talk) 20:55, 8 March 2008 (UTC)