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Latest comment: 9 months ago by WDGP in topic Proof-read

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After reading your article it is very well written with great content that matches the overall article topic. Some simple changes that I made were certain word choices in your sentences and also fixed small grammatical errors. For some longer sentences I helped break them up to be more concise for readability. I also helped fixed capitalization errors specifically on the words "Black" and "White" when describing race should be capitalized. And I added some links that I thought would help readers that might need more background information on certain words and topics. One suggestion that I have but is not necessary is to try and find an image of Prior Fosters land that you discussed as it might add some more clarity to your article. Mfg05 (talk) 19:48, 20 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

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Your article offers valuable information about Prior Foster. It is very concise and easy to understand. I've made some small changes such as modifying a one or two sentences in order for them to have a little bit more sense, or fixing some small grammatical errors. If I have to recommend one thing, I'd say adding an image of Prior Foster in the lead section if there is one (or an additional image of his land) and an image of the Underground Railroad on the next section. It will just help the readers to get an idea of what it looked like as they read through your article. WDGP (talk) 18:40, 21 October 2025 (UTC)Reply