Talk:OpenHydro
Add topicLatest comment: 2 years ago by Drnoble in topic Disputed neutrality
Disputed neutrality
[edit]Hi @Mattdaviesfsic, can you please elaborate on what (sections) of this article are not neutral, or what could be improved on the page? I am also unclear why the page is flagged linkrot, as there are no bare URLs. Thanks, Drnoble (talk) 09:52, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
- The un-neutral bit I considered was the phrase:
OpenHydro developed a novel open-centred horizontal-axis turbine, surrounded by a ducting shroud which was claimed to have multiple benefits...
- At first glance it sounded a bit promotional in tone, but I marked it because I wasn't 100% sure (maybe it is fine anyway). Looking back at it, I would recommend the addition of sections to the article but that's a minor matter.
- Please ignore the bare URLs, I was quite tired...!
- Hope that helps.
- About me, talk to me; to notify me, type [[User|Mattdaviesfsic]]. Thanks! 13:09, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Mattdaviesfsic. I've removed the word "novel" and added section headings as you suggest. Thanks for reviewing the article and your comments to help improve it, appreciated. Cheers, Drnoble (talk) 15:54, 1 January 2024 (UTC)