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Latest comment: 8 days ago by ABehjat in topic Additional Iterations
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Thank you for your review, @Josedimaria!

The links I've compiled and provided don't seem to be personal blogs. I followed the guideline specified here to present the data: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Verifiability#Newspaper_and_magazine_blogs

I can review the links and remove those that are in clear violation of reliability condition if you think is more suitable. ABehjat (talk) 17:54, 22 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

@ABehjat: Okay, do that. hola 11:11, 23 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
@, done a pass. Here are key changes:
  • Removed the Relentless Beats interview (published by the promoter of an upcoming show, primary + non-independent), and dropped a promotional name-drop sourced to The Nocturnal Times.
  • Re-sourced the basics (location, 2015 mau5trap signing) to Mixmag and EDM.com.
  • Attributed in-text the interview/self-authored material (EDM Identity, C-Heads, DJ Times) per WP:BLPSELFPUB, since those are the artist speaking about himself.
  • Kept as independent secondary coverage: Mixmag, Music Connection (2024 feature by Brett Callwood), and EDM.com. These are established outlets, not personal blogs.
On notability, the core claim is WP:MUSICBIO #5: Two studio albums on two notable labels (mau5trap, Monstercat)
ABehjat (talk) 00:36, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
Draft still needs coverage from non-music related newspapers and sources that have to do with his personality (interviews are welcomed here), not just about songs he released. @ABehjat: hola 16:44, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
@ I've done a pass aimed squarely at both points.
Added two new biography sections so the article isn't just a release log - Early life and Personal life. These lean on interviews (the Back to Back podcast, C-Heads, Music Connection), which you noted are welcome here - and since they're the subject talking about himself, every such claim is attributed in-text per WP:BLPSELFPUB.
Additional sourcing: I found and added three bylined Magnetic Magazine features (2020, 2021, 2024). I made sure they're independent editorial coverage of Secret Level, the Electromag compilation, and his production/artistry, not just release blurbs.
On non-music newspapers: I searched for general-interest and local (Orange County / Mission Viejo) press, and I couldn't find any. As far as I can tell there isn't non-music newspaper coverage of him at this point. So I've concentrated on the two things that are actually available: the personality/biographical material from the interviews you green-lit, and firming up the independent secondary music sourcing.
I still believe the notability basis remains WP:MUSICBIO #5, two studio albums on two notable labels (mau5trap, Monstercat), and now backed by a good WP:GNG spine (specifically Mixmag, Music Connection, EDM.com, and the three Magnetic pieces).
Looking forward to your feedback,
ABehjat (talk) 19:26, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
@ABehjat: While you keep improving the draft, check the edit summary on my last edit on the draft. hola 21:20, 24 June 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Josedimaria, following up on the recent edits - I tried to source any article I could find relating to birth of Jordan's son and I couldn't. But given the rest of the available corpus, I don't think that would disqualify the draft. Would it? ABehjat (talk) 17:13, 30 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

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@Z. Patterson

Wanted to give an update that I removed the note about child being born because it’s not something I could find to confirm it. Also removed any ABOUTSELF that I added before (citing content from the record label he was part of because it was primary source)

let me know if any additional iterations are needed.

thanks! ABehjat (talk) 00:30, 2 August 2026 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. I have reviewed the draft and accepted it. Z. Patterson (talk) 19:28, 2 August 2026 (UTC)Reply
Thank you very much and I appreciate the review! ABehjat (talk) 21:20, 2 August 2026 (UTC)Reply