Talk:Neutral network (evolution)

New additions to text

Thank you to the anonymous editors F3DA, 99D3 and A93B. It's always great to see new editors contributing to an article. I've a few comments as feedback, that I hope would help improve it further:

• Much of the added 'Mathematical framework' section reads more as a history section. It might be worth considering splitting int into two sections.
• References should go after punctuation (tutorial). I've updated the existing ones.
  • Also, there's an inbuilt tool for citing references, or alternatively, you can use this external tool to format the reference by just adding the doi.
• External links are generally not used in the main text. They're better replaced with internal wikilinks, or just plain text (tutorial).
• Although common in scientific reviews, you don't need to mention the name of each author of each paper in the main text, except where the author is a integral to the concept. Interested readers can look up the author in the citation. (short Wikipedia for Scientists presentation)

Hopefully that helps! Let me know if you need any assistance. some of the things I've suggested are easier with VisualEditor interface, when you get access to when you sign up for an account. I've aimed to help out with some of the formatting where I've spotted it. T.Shafee(Evo&Evo)^talk 00:32, 19 May 2017 (UTC)