Talk:Naomi Chapman Woodroof
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2021 and 28 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hcooper799. Peer reviewers: Klcrawford2021, Azaria.P.
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Peer Review
[edit]You have done well with writing neutrally and writing the information in a direct manner. There are a couple of changes I can suggest,if able to provide more information in the lead paragraph especially but in other areas too. The article lacks a strong lead paragraph, by adding more information you will be able to strengthen it. Also one mre photo in the main area would be helpful too. Azaria.P (talk) 02:15, 7 April 2021 (UTC) Thank you for your feedback, I will be continuing to work on the article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hcooper799 (talk • contribs) 18:18, 8 April 2021 (UTC)