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Latest comment: 2 years ago by St.nerol in topic Why is the lead too long?

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This article is really bad and most of the information in it is wrong. I am going to try to completely rewrite it.--67.164.139.172 (talk) 19:47, 5 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Ref to be added

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Here's another good reference for the present article.

  • Dawson, Warren R. (1927), "Mummy as a Drug", Proceedings of the Royal Society of Medicine 21(1): 34–39.

Keahapana (talk) 23:14, 27 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

Why is the lead too long?

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St.nerol, you've added a "lead section may be too long" maintenance template to the article, can you explain your rationale behind it? The lead currently has about 225 words, the whole article about 2000 – so it's 11% of the total, which hardly seems too much. Originally the lead was formatted as a single paragraph, and for that it was too long, I agree with that. However, I have now split it into three paragraphs, and I think it's fine now. Do you agree, or do you still find it "too long"? Gawaon (talk) 11:47, 29 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Yes, I was likely fooled by the single long paragraph. Removing template.–St.nerol (talk) 12:06, 29 October 2023 (UTC)Reply