Talk:Love Always/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 02:51, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:53, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Jodeci went on hiatus in 1996. This is rather ungrammatical, can you rewrite?

   My grammar is not the best. What is ungrammatical about it? Michael Jester (talk) 03:34, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

   Okay, I think I fixed it. Michael Jester (talk) 21:23, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

   Henderson called the album's ballads and slow jams "above average" but appreciated the 1970s soul music feel on the album. could do with re-writing, appears contradictory in tone.

   I reworded it a little bit. Michael Jester (talk) 03:34, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

   There are a number of single sentence and short paragraphs, which could do with consolidation in accordance with the MoS

   I think I have fixed this. Michael Jester (talk) 03:34, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Statements are sourced to RS, no evidence of OR

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   They appeared as featured artists in songs including "How Do U Want It", This is one example - are there any others and why is Tupac Shakur not mentioned?

   Added Tupac and added other single. Michael Jester (talk) 03:34, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   NPOV

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   One imge used with suitable FUR rationale.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   On hold for seven days for issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 03:10, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

   OK, this passes muster now. Listed as GA. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:50, 29 November 2011 (UTC)

I appreciate you for reviewing Love Always!
—Michael Jester (talk) 03:34, 24 November 2011 (UTC)