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Latest comment: 11 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 12:46, 29 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that the Little Valley Fire in Washoe Valley, Nevada, in October 2016, responsible for destroying 23 homes, was caused by strong winds reigniting a prescribed burn?
    • Source: Nelson, Paul (April 6, 2022). "Fire Experts Review Prescribed Burn That Caused Little Valley Fire". www.2news.com. KTVN. Retrieved August 3, 2025.
    • Reviewed:
Moved to mainspace by Hurricane Wind and Fire (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Hurricane Wind and Fire (talk) 02:21, 3 August 2025 (UTC).Reply

  • Comment: @Hurricane Wind and Fire: I'm seeing some issues that should be addressed. This sentence doesn't make much sense and the source might not support it: Residents in New Washoe City, Franktown, Washoe Valley, the Washoe Lake area, Montreaux, and St. James Road, with evacuations persisting until October 17 for Franktown Road. Please fix it. I think you are trying to communicate something like "Closures and evacuations were in effect for residents in New Washoe City, Franktown, Washoe Valley, the Washoe Lake area, Montreaux, and St. James Road, with evacuations persisting until October 17 for Franktown Road." However, you will probably need to fix up the sources. Viriditas (talk) 21:18, 24 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
    • There were 101 horses, seventeen smaller house pets, and one parrot. You're assuming and implying that this connects with Washoe County Regional Animal Services evacuating the animals per the previous sentence, but you need to connect that for the reader. The standalone sentence doesn't do it. Viriditas (talk) 21:26, 24 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Moved from draft to main space within the appropriate time period. New and long enough. Earwig shows minor technical wording and proper nouns. Some phrasing might be better paraphrased. Note, I uploaded a HQ version of the image in the infobox. It looks like you had accidentally uploaded the LQ one, and it was impossible to gleam any info from it. I also performed a series of minor copyedits, the majority of which were for MOS purposes. I should compliment you on the table in "Growth and containment". This is one of the few instances I can recall where a table is actually helpful and informative to the reader. However, this also makes me think you should consider summarizing what this table shows and adding a few sentences to the lead section. Not necessary of course, but it would be helpful. Minor copyedits still required per comments up above. Once that it is done, we can move on to the hook. I like ALT1 but we could improve it further, perhaps with ALT1a, ALT1b, etc. ALT0 isn't that interesting to me. Going with new hooks ALT1b and ALT1c unless new ones are provided. Viriditas (talk) 00:54, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • @Viriditas: Fixed grammar issues, significantly expanded lead, added another source to the closures and evacuations section. For the Washoe County Library source, at the Oct. 14 update at 2:45 pm update, it states Evacuations for residents of the Galena, Montreaux, Joy Lake RD., and St. James neighborhoods can return home, showing there were, at some point, evacuations for those areas. The NV Appeal article provides similar information. I will provide a new hook below. Hurricane Wind and Fire (talk) 00:46, 25 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
ALT1a is pretty long and hard to read. Would you be okay with a trimmed version?
  • ALT1b: ... that the Little Valley Fire resulted in a $25 million lawsuit and prompted the evacuation of 101 horses and one parrot?
  • ALT1c: ... that the Little Valley Fire prompted the evacuation of 101 horses and one parrot?
Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:40, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Viriditas: Forgot to ping. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:42, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5: I agree. Going with ALT1b and ALT1c unless new hooks are offered. Viriditas (talk) 00:54, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Viriditas: I don't have any other nominations. Thanks you for the hooks, @Narutolovehinata5:. I prefer Alt1B. Hurricane Wind and Fire (talk) 03:24, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply