Talk:Lebanne/GA1
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GA review
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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 14 January 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Olliefant (talk · contribs) 17:37, 15 January 2026 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- [action roleplaying game] [Pokémon Legends: Z-A] is an MOS:SOB violation
- Reworded
- [toxic] [yuri] is an MOS:SOB violation
- Reworded
- Link Jacinthe
- Done
- Add alt text to the image
- Done
Concept and design
[edit]- "Created for the 2025 sequel" sequel to what?
- This wording's usually been fine in articles, but I did make it more clear Z-A is a sequel to X & Y.
- I think the final sentence seems a bit repetitive
- Tried to reword this?
Appearances
[edit]- The information regarding the fight is unclear. Also is it a one time event or is it repeatable
- Reworded, not sure what the exact hangup is though. Establishing her as a boss though already informs the reader this battle is a one-time event by default unless otherwise noted.
- my bad I mean the DLC fight, the previous section was fine. The dlc section just says there was a fight without any context
- Should be fixed now.
- "(SBC)" can be dropped as the acronym doesn't appear again
- Done.
Critical reception
[edit]- The last sentence of paragraph one is somewhat confusing. Maybe break it up into what Shepard felt and the fan reaction separate
- Tweaked
- "Queer coded" doesn't have a hyphen
- Fixed
References
[edit]- Ref 4 should be labeled as being from "Inside Games" not just "Inside"
- Fixed
- Ref 8 is missing the website
- Fixed
@Olliefant: I tried to address all the issues. Let me know if there's anything else.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 21:53, 15 January 2026 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.