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Latest comment: 15 years ago by HAdG in topic Tone and references

Tone and references

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I do not think the "advertisement" tag should be on this article. If no one disagrees, I will remove it.OngoingCivilUnrest 05:02, 21 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

I think the article does read too much like an advertisement written by Knipex itself, with language that is almost boastful.. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.72.87.180 (talk) 17:44, 7 November 2008 (UTC)Reply
The article does give a strong impression of containing large amounts of carefully selected inside information, which is probably unverifiable. I have changed the tone slightly to remove words like "high-end" and "world-leading". References are still missing. --HAdG (talk) 16:35, 29 July 2011 (UTC)Reply