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Latest comment: 5 years ago by Tony 1212 in topic Lead section

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In March 2020 an editor tagged that the lead section was inadequate. I feel a reference to the fact that she focused almost exclusively on her acting career from 1966 would suffice. Ok if I do that? Aineireland (talk) 22:11, 18 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

You can certainly add that... Generally the lead should act as a brief summary of the whole article, so you can maybe view it in that light as well, adding something pertinent to each section or subsection, if you wish. Or I can take a look later as well (busy with a few other articles at present...) The whole article could probably do with a bit of expansion anyway in my view. but that is a task for another day... Best - Tony Rees Tony 1212 (talk) 23:05, 18 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
Fair enough - although as you will see from my recent edit, there is still a shortage of references in various places that ideally need addressing. The subject matter in general is not really one of my major interests (or even minor ones). Consequently, I do not intend to add anything further. - Derek R Bullamore (talk) 20:39, 19 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
No worries, I had it in my mind to do a bit of an update on this article at some point and this may be the prompt I need (made a start a little while ago, more to do). Tony 1212 (talk) 22:16, 19 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
OK, now done so far as I can, also lead section extended further - hope you like it... Cheers Tony 1212 (talk) 10:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC)Reply