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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Freeknowledgecreator in topic Addition of "criticism" section

Addition of "criticism" section

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Sxologist, in this edit you rearranged existing text in the article by adding a "Criticism" section. I reverted your edit. I'd like to explain why. Your edit not only did not improve the article, but was, in my judgment, illogical and confusing. It was illogical, because the "Reception" section includes a section titled "Overview", which is meant to summarize the book's overall reception. A book's overall reception includes the criticism it receives. If you try to add a separate section for criticism, and shift all the criticism there, the "Overview" section looses its rationale and cannot do its job properly. In addition to being illogical, your change was confusing because not all of the material you placed in the "Criticism" section was in fact concerned with criticism of the book. Please consider your edits more carefully. Freeknowledgecreator (talk) 00:05, 12 March 2020 (UTC)Reply