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Latest comment: 4 months ago by Clovermoss in topic This bit looks like it could use an edit

Edits to Lead

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11/15: I edited the lead of this story for clarity and relevancy. I removed quotes from the NYT article and rephrased it to clarify that Hannah Neeleman is the focus of the article, rather than her farm. I also removed the mention of the tradwife aesthetic, as I think this is more relevant to the "Social Media" section. Cookhailey (talk) 08:38, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

11/15: I further edited the "Social media section to exclude controversies and mention of pageantry. Controversies should be its own section, and the mention of pageantry falls under the "Pageantry" section. Also, I made sure Neeleman was referred to by her last name and updated social media stats. Cookhailey (talk) 09:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Cookhailey, I've restored the paragraph that discusses criticisms of Ballerina Farm. Controversies should not be their own section; the essay WP:CRITS discusses this. And no good reason was given for complete removal of that content. Schazjmd (talk) 14:40, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for bringing this to my attention. Cookhailey (talk) 15:15, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Edits to "Farm and business operations": Patch plagiarism and Tone

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For "Farm and business operations": Added more information, fixed tonal inconsistencies (i.e. switching between "Neeleman," "Ms. Neeleman," and "Hannah"), and rephrased to edit out instances of patch plagiarism. I want to note that I am seeing repeated instances of patch plagiarism. Let's try to avoid this. Also, It is pretty standard (and generally considered respectful) to refer to a subject by their last name after having used their full name. Cookhailey (talk) 17:54, 15 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Requested move 18 February 2026

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. Moved as an uncontested request with minimal participation. If there is any objection within a reasonable time frame, please ask me to reopen the discussion; if I am not available, please ask at the technical requests page. (closed by non-admin page mover) ASUKITE 21:16, 18 February 2026 (UTC)Reply


Hannah Neeleman (Ballerina Farm)Hannah Neeleman – Per WP:CONCISE. This is the only Hannah Neeleman on Wikipedia so the extended title is unnecessary for disambiguation, and nicknames are not a valid usage of a parenthetical. Jasper Deng (talk) 07:13, 18 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Support move, no disambiguation is needed.
Schazjmd (talk) 14:48, 18 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This bit looks like it could use an edit

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"though both are run by Elaine Marmel, an 86-year-old who additionally heads the Mrs. World competition" Her age isn't relevant, is it?~2026-12635-34 (talk) 07:16, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

I agree, I'll remove that. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 13:48, 4 April 2026 (UTC)Reply