Talk:HMS Hebrus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 29 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:21, 29 December 2022 (UTC)

• Images properly licensed
• Constructed as part of expansions to the navy Awkward

• Rephrased.

• with the red pine. The final three, of which Hebrus was one, received the yellow pine instead. Why use the article in front of the color?

• Removed.

• link to depth of hold rather than just hold

• Done.

• Hebrus and her class received a distinctly shallower depth received?

• Rephrased.

• two further 32-pounder try additional instead

• Done.

• This completed the Battle of Jobourg ended

• Done.

• Any info on refloating the ship after the storm on the Patuxent or on any damage sustained?

• The source does not further mention the incident. I assume the damage was minimal.

• caught in a hurricane, which she weathered. In the aftermath the considerable swell caused one man to fall overboard. Awkward, probably best to combine the sentences

• Rephrased.

• Nicely done. I'd suggest deleting the refbegin and refend tags in your references section as it makes things harder for readers with impaired vision--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:36, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for the review! Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:34, 5 January 2023 (UTC)