Talk:Geet Ramayan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• Marathi language is overlinked.

Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.

It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".

Yeah. I hadnt removed that intentionally. Anyway, removed now.

• the television --> television

Done

• with songs composed by --> and the songs being composed by

Done

• lyrics and music, including singing --> lyrics, music and singing

Done

• References should be after punctuation marks.

I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?

Check the first para of the lead.

Done

• most popular should be quoted.

Done

• You have already mentioned that Phadke was the composer

Done

• aired --> being aired

Done

• chose should be in past tense Sorry, you have used the correct word.

Can you explain this a bit? I didnt get you here.

• called --> was called

Done

• Ādhunik Valmiki should be italicised

Done

• No need to overlink IST

Done. Removed it from the lead

The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.

Done

• angered Madgulkar readily declined --> which was readily declined by an angered Madgulkar

Done

• The names of the songs should be italicised

Not per WP:MOS

• who included --> which included

Done

• The second para of "Music and singing" section has no references.

Done

• Describe Nishadraj and the boatmen

Done

• "He was shown to be distracted at the loss Sita ... confessions of loyalty to Sita (in "Lokasākṣa Shuddhī Jhālī")." - Reference needed.

Done Though songs can be used as a reference for itself.

• The lead should have some content of the "Characters" section.

Done

• The last source in the ref section needs fields like publisher and other if possible.

Done

Once these issues are fixed I will pass this article. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

I have fixed some all of your concerns. Thanks for your review. - Vivvt • (Talk) 03:17, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 03:24, 28 March 2013 (UTC)