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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Ayuskoto in topic Things that probably need to be fixed

Things that probably need to be fixed

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  • grammatical errors that I've missed, including double-spaces, especially after periods
  • standardization of the spelling/formatting of "nifo oti" (e.g. in regards to capitalization, spacing, presence of quotation marks) (I understand that, in the Etymology section, there's the version with the glottal stop. By standardization, I mean in the rest of the article.)
  • more inline citations, especially in the Revival section
  • organizational issues, such as unnecessary repetitivity
  • maybe the tone in some parts?
  • the 4th paragraph in Revival, starting with "Ms. Tavita Vaofi…", may contain unnecessary and/or confusing information

I'm new here, so I don't feel really comfortable doing more than grammatical edits at this time. Perhaps someone who's been here for more than a week could help with this. Thanks!  Preceding unsigned comment added by Ayuskoto (talkcontribs) 22:32, 22 June 2020 (UTC)Reply