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Latest comment: 12 years ago by Yzx in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Finless sleeper ray/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 14:57, 19 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

This is the least controversial pass I've seen in a while- it seems to utilise the literature well, and is written and illustrated with care. Just a few quick comments:

  • Can we have a distribution category/categories?
Added some.
  • What does Temera mean?
I've looked but found nothing; I can only speculate that it was an obscure 19th century local name
  • "Little is known about parasites of the finless sleeper ray;" This comes across as slightly OR-y; I can let it slide if need be, but do you perhaps have a source saying that little is known about parasites?
I've removed the phrase.
Category added

Once these have been looked into, I'll be happy to promote. J Milburn (talk) 14:57, 19 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 22:11, 19 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
Great- I'm promoting now. J Milburn (talk) 09:37, 20 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 16:07, 20 December 2013 (UTC)Reply