Talk:Existence (The X-Files)/GA2

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 13:58, 30 May 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: It's the eighth season finale, but what episode number is that? I can see in infobox it is Episode 21, it should be in that first sentence though
• Lede: The episode first aired in the United States on May 20, 2001 on Fox, and subsequently aired in the United Kingdom on June 28, 2001 on Sky1 → The episode first premiered on Fox in the United States on May 20, 2001, and subsequently aired in the United Kingdom on June 28, 2001 on Sky1
• Lede: The episode received largely positive reviews from critics. → The episode received largely positive reviews from television critics. Or media critics or Television commentator
• Lede: an arc that would continue throughout the ninth season. → an arc that continued throughout the ninth season.
• Production: Writing and casting — From here on, Monica Reyes becomes a main character on the show → From here on, Monica Reyes become a main character on the show
• Production: Effects and filming — Skinner just wanted to Kill Krycek so bad → Skinner just wanted to kill Krycek so bad
• Reception: "Existence" premiered on May 20, 2001 on American television on Fox → "Existence" premiered on Fox in the United States on May 20, 2001
• Reception: Add bullets — behind Star Trek Voyager and The Simpsons → behind Star Trek: Voyager and The Simpsons
• Footnotes: Ref. 3 — Fox Home Entertainment → 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment (also link there)

On hold until above issues fixed. Tate Brandley Stockwell 13:58, 30 May 2012 (UTC)

Thank you very much for this review. I believe I've addressed everything. I didn't change the Skinner part because that's part of a quote and therefore I don't want to change what the guy said.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:30, 30 May 2012 (UTC)