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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jonathan A Jones in topic Family

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@Jonathan A Jones: Thank you for your restoration of the text regarding their daughters. I feel the current wording ("There are three daughters") doesn't quite scan; it feels a bit abstract, not linking their daughters to them (it kind of feels like a non sequitur). Would "they had three daughters" be acceptable? — Sasuke Sarutobi (push to talk) 18:26, 13 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

The current form of words was chosen after discussions with Elspeth herself, who felt that all the alternatives (including "they had three daughters") were worse. Of course she doesn't ultimately get to control the wording here, but I see no reason not to accede to her request in this case. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 20:23, 13 March 2019 (UTC)Reply