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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA review

Died in 1989?

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I looked on Ancestry and found the following in the California, U.S., Death Index, 1940-1997 -

Name: Richard Louis Moje

Social Security #: 560221191

Gender: Male

Birth Date: 8 May 1927

Birth Place: California

Death Date: 22 Jun 1989

Death Place: Los Angeles

Mother's Maiden Name: McConkey

https://www.statscrew.com/football/stats/p-mojedic001 also shows this as his death date. One of the references linked to on his page also lists it.

Skycloud86 (talk) 14:53, 12 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Dick Moje/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:02, 26 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:24, 26 August 2025 (UTC)Reply


I'll review this. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:24, 26 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

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  • Regarding his mile run, I think you should add the exact time to provide context for how fast it actually was.
    • Done.
  • Moje enrolled at Glendale Community College in 1946 and played football there. The Pasadena Independent described him as a "very fine wingman"-->Moje enrolled at Glendale Community College in 1946 and played football, with The Pasadena Independent describing him in 1946 as a "very fine wingman".
    • Done.
  • and was considered one of the best at his position on the west coast, according to the Honolulu Star-Bulletin.-->; the Honolulu Star-Bulletin identified Moje as one of the best at his position on the west coast that season.
    • Done.
  • Any clarity on why he was deemed ineligible?
    • Couldn't figure out why.
  • of the American Football League (AFL) just "AFL" linked is fine
    • Done.
  • References:
    • All appear reliable for what is being cited
    • All are consistently formatted
    • Spot checks: 3, 6, 7, 11
      • 3 and 4 are the same reference link
        • Fixed.

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:58, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.