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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sandyderulo. Peer reviewers: Filmstudiesclass01, Kay2416.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Hello. Here are a few suggestions that could improve your page:

  • Maybe adding her birthday beside her name in parenthesis rather than having it under Early Life and Education. This could be found in other Wikipedia pages.
  • There are a couple of instances where you will translate names of institutions in English but I think that maybe you can keep the name in French and add beside the English translation.
  • Grammatical errors to check up on more as well as errors in school names.
  • If you use accents in location names I would try to stay consistent with it.
  • The second sentence under Career is missing Italics for the films.
  • Statements like "Back in Quebec" or "In (insert date)" could maybe use more commas.
  • In Career you use the word crue in a sentence other than the title of her film. If non-French speakers read it they may not know what it is. So maybe you can use flood as you did previously in that paragraph.
  • Maybe you can mention what French Festival it is in the last sentence of your second paragraph in Career.

I find that your subject is interesting and that you did a great job overall.

--Kay2416 (talk) 21:01, 20 March 2016 (UTC)Reply