Talk:Data discourse

Peer Review

-A few grammar mistakes, mobilized, naturalizes, utilized, and Foucault

-Give a brief example on one of Foucault's theories on the term 'discourse'

-Maybe move the paragraph "Examples of data discourse" right under the first paragraph of "definition of discourse" I thought having examples follow up the definition will help in understanding the term

-Maybe change the subtitles to start each word with a capital letter

-Add more to the "Data as discourse" paragraph, or add it into the definition paragraph

-Nice use of big data, explaining how those terms go together

-Elaborate on what imaginaries means to clarify the last two paragraphs, maybe give it its own paragraph to define it

Chrispedia315 (talk) 18:44, 21 November 2022 (UTC)