Talk:Dark Auction/GA2

GA review

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Nominator: Veyhola (talk · contribs) 20:04, 10 March 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 22:49, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Hello! I will review this within a week or two. ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 22:49, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Prose

• In the lead, at "The game was met with controversy regarding the initial title" you should mention what that title was.

Gameplay

• "exploration of the life of a "fictional" dictator" – I would remove those marks as vague and informal writing.
• I would do "Players explore the area in first person while rooms lock them into place, forcing them to investigate from a fixed perspective" to connect the sentences better.
• "that leads you" – change to "that leads the player"
• "Once players retrieve information, it is then placed in their Word Cloud" – change to "Once players retrieve information, it is placed in their Word Cloud".
• Does EPO stand for anything?

Plot

• I think "five participants auctions' succeed" should be "five participants' auctions succeed".
• "Noah doesn't realize" – change to "Noah does not realize".

Development

• "described it as "authentic" mystery adventure" – change to "described it as an "authentic" mystery adventure".
• "initial stages of development, he" – should be "initial stages of development, that he". Relatedly:
• Make the next part "rest of the developer team".

Promotion and release

• "announcement of the game under its original title" – it makes sense to mention what the original title was here rather than in the next sentence.
• What date was the "Story, Mystery & Bidding" trailer released?
• No need to bold-text the yen symbol.

Reception

• Also mention the Metacritic score in the first sentence of this section.
• To remove the redundancy and make it blend more seamlessly, you could make it: Viana would further praise the game for its art and soundtrack, but noted that these "are nowhere near enough to save this game."

Spotcheck

Passes. I verified some randomly-chosen sources: refs 2, 4, 8 and 16.

Thank you for the fun read! I might play this VN despite the reviews. Anyhow, I have now placed this article on hold to allow for you to make any changes. Please ping me once you are finished so that I can know when to take another look. Also, feel free to ask any questions or refute any of my proposed changes! :) ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 18:42, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

Alright, I'ma get to it Veyhola (talk) 21:16, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

EPO seemingly doesn't stand for anything, I've checked multiple sources. Veyhola (talk) 07:41, 17 April 2026 (UTC)

@LunaEatsTuna Done Veyhola (talk) 08:08, 17 April 2026 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay! Nice work on the changes. I am happy now to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 05:40, 24 April 2026 (UTC)

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