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Latest comment: 9 days ago by Daniel Kondo in topic Request for independent review of autobiography tag

Possible response to Hoary's request for attributed critical reception

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Hello.

I am the subject of this draft and therefore have a conflict of interest under WP:COI. For that reason I am deliberately not editing the draft directly.

I think Hoary's observation identifies a real weakness in the current version. The sentence stating that my books and illustrations "have been discussed in literary criticism and academic studies" is too general and does not indicate what those sources actually contribute.

After reviewing the references again, it seems that several of the independent secondary sources already cited contain substantial critical analysis of the work itself, rather than simply mentioning publications or awards. It may therefore be more useful to summarize those analyses briefly, with attribution, instead of making a general statement.

For ease of reference, these appear to be the sources that provide the most substantive discussion:

• Jaqueline Silva. "Um sítio ilustrado." *Quatro Cinco Um* (25 March 2026). https://quatrocincoum.com.br/entrevistas/literatura/literatura-infantojuvenil/um-sitio-ilustrado/

Discusses the picture book as a narrative form and examines the relationship between illustration, typography and graphic design in Kondo's work.

• Guilherme Gontijo Flores. "Entrar en la boca." *Fundación Cuatrogatos*. https://www.cuatrogatos.org/es/site/bitacora/1690

Reviews *Big Bad Wolf with a Toothache*, discussing the book's physical structure as part of the narrative experience.

• Dirce Waltrick do Amarante. "Um lobo com fome de literatura." *Le Monde diplomatique Brasil* (19 November 2025). https://diplomatique.org.br/um-lobo-com-fome-de-literatura/

Examines the relationship between graphic design and narrative in *Big Bad Wolf with a Toothache*.

• Lilane Maria de Moura Chagas & Caroline Machado. "Monstros do Cinema: da criatura livro às criaturas que nele habitam."

Clássicos da Literatura Infantojuvenil em Forma(to) de Livro-Objeto. Edited by Sara Reis da Silva. University of Minho Press, 2020.

https://ebooks.uminho.pt/index.php/uminho/catalog/download/13/46/535

Discusses Monstros do Cinema in relation to editorial design, materiality and reading.

• Sandra Trabucco Valenzuela.

"Monstros do Cinema, de Massi e Kondo: literatura infantil e juvenil como proposta transmídia."

Proceedings of the XVI ABRALIC International Congress (2019).

Interprets the work as a transmedia narrative within children's literature.

• Lélia de Almeida Arraes Freitas.

"O percurso da literatura infantil e uma análise literária visual da obra Sonhozzz."

REUNINA, vol. 6, no. 1 (2026).

https://revista.unina.edu.br/index.php/re/article/download/280/261/933

Examines *Sonhozzz* through multimodality, focusing on the interaction between text and visual language.

I am not suggesting that every one of these sources should necessarily be incorporated, nor that any specific wording should be adopted. I hope these references may assist editors in evaluating whether the cited sources provide the substantive independent coverage requested in the review comment.

If editors conclude that only some of these sources are appropriate, or that they should be summarized differently, I would completely defer to their editorial judgment.

Thank you for your time, and for reviewing the draft. Daniel Kondo (talk) 23:12, 4 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Update following AfC review

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Hello.

I am the subject of this draft and therefore have a conflict of interest under [[WP:COI]]. Following Hoary’s review comment, I have revised the draft to remove the general statement about literary criticism and instead summarize specific independent critical analyses with attribution.

The revised version now includes commentary from Lunetas and Quatro Cinco Um, describing how these reviewers have interpreted aspects of the visual language, materiality and graphic design of the work. I also corrected the wording of the BolognaRagazzi recognition to reflect the official designation of a Special Mention in the New Horizons category.

I have tried to improve the draft by relying on independent secondary sources and by reducing unsupported or overly promotional claims.

If further changes are considered appropriate, I will defer entirely to the judgment of independent editors.

Thank you for your time and for reviewing the draft. Daniel Kondo (talk) 12:34, 24 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Comments left by AfC reviewers

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  • Comment: We read: His books and illustrations have been discussed in literary criticism and academic studies concerned with picture books, illustration and graphic design.
    Does the literary criticism, do the academic studies, provide worthwhile insights into Kondo's work?
    If some do, then summarize them, of course specifying who says what (and where they say it).
    If any do not, then don't bother mentioning their existence. Hoary (talk)WWU 👍︎ 01:15, 4 July 2026 (UTC)Reply

Request for independent review of autobiography Tag

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Request for independent review of autobiography tag

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Hello,

I am Daniel Kondo, the subject of this article and I have a conflict of interest under WP:COI. For that reason I'm not editing the article directly.

I would like to ask an uninvolved editor to review whether the

maintenance tag is still necessary in the article's current form.

The tag was addded in July 2026, while the article was still being developed. Since then, the text has been substantially revised, with greater reliance on independent secondary sources, attributed criticism, and academic discussion. The draft subsequently went through the Articles for Creation process and was accepted on 25 August 2026.

I understand that acceptance through AfC does not by itself resolve concerns about autobiographical editing, and I am not suggesting that the tag should be removed simply because the article was accepted.

My request is only that an independent editor review the article as it now stands, particularly its neutrality, balance, sourcing, and reliance on independent coverage, and decide whether the maintenance tag continues to be warranted.

I will leave that decision entirely to uninvolved editors.

Thank you for taking the time to review it.

Daniel Kondo (talk) 21:51, 14 September 2026 (UTC)Reply