Talk:Dan Blumenthal

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 19:47, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that Dan Blumenthal supported former House Speaker Nancy Pelosi's 2022 visit to Taiwan? Source: https://www.pbs.org/newshour/show/pelosis-planned-visit-to-taiwan-raises-concerns-in-the-u-s-and-china
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Created by W9793 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:27, 19 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Dan Blumenthal; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

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• Interesting: - n

QPQ: None required.

Overall: New and long enough, sourced, neutral and not plagiarized (Earwig's tool reports a possible violation, but that's due to the quotes used). The only problem is the hook, which is not interesting enough in my opinion. Supporting a politician's visit is not unusual; please find an alternate hook. — MaterialWorks 20:42, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing. What about ALT1: ... that George W. Bush administration senior country director for China, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and Mongolia Dan Blumenthal believes China has three roads to gain control of Taiwan? Source: https://thehill.com/opinion/national-security/3896916-china-has-three-roads-to-taiwan-the-us-must-block-them-all/ W9793 (talk)

• That's better, but I think it's a bit too long; try to be more concise. Plus, it's not mentioned in the article (the piece is listed in the article, but there's no prose about it). — MaterialWorks 09:40, 15 November 2023 (UTC)

What about ALT2: ... that Bush administration senior defense official Dan Blumenthal believes China has three roads to gain control of Taiwan? Source: https://thehill.com/opinion/national-security/3896916-china-has-three-roads-to-taiwan-the-us-must-block-them-all/ I've also added a block quote from the op-ed. W9793 (talk)

• I think we're good now, approved ALT2. — MaterialWorks 18:56, 15 November 2023 (UTC)