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Nominator: Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk · contribs) 03:04, 23 October 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: MCE89 (talk · contribs) 05:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)
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Hello, I'll review this. Will add my comments shortly. MCE89 (talk) 05:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)
- @MCE89: I've responded to your comments. Thanks. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 01:37, 3 February 2026 (UTC)
- Looks good to me! Passing this now. MCE89 (talk) 08:20, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
Initial checks
[edit]- Images:
No relevant free images available that I could find, but the map is a nice addition and is free - Copyright:
No issues apparent on Earwig. Will do further checks for close paraphrasing as part of my source spotchecks - Stability and authorship:
No issues
Prose review
[edit]This is very well-written, just a few small nitpicks:
...began one of the first to sell gangsta rap records...
- Should be "...became one of the first..."- Fixed.
officially Compton Fashion Center
- Suggest changing to "officially the Compton Fashion Center"- I don't think this is necessary if "the" is not part of the official name itself. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 01:37, 3 February 2026 (UTC)
Kim, a North Korean defector...
- I’m not sure I’ve heard people who left North Korea during the Korean war referred to as "defectors" before, since that's more often a term applied to those who left later (particularly from the 1990s onwards) - it might be more accurate to call him a war refugee, or just someone who fled North Korea during the Korean war?- Good point; I had the timeline wrong in my head. Changed to just "Korean", since that's the only part that's important enough for the lead. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 01:37, 3 February 2026 (UTC)
The vendor carried artists...
- Suggest changing to "Kim carried artists" or "Kim’s stall carried artists"- Done.
Source review
[edit]- No concerns regarding source reliability
- It looks like there's a new paper that's been published since you nominated this that discusses Cycadelic Records and the Compton Swap Meet, so there may be information in that paper that's useful to include: https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/00961442251378459
- Thanks for pointing this out! I've expanded the article with info from this source. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 01:37, 3 February 2026 (UTC)
Spot checks
[edit]This table checks 6 passages from throughout the article (20.7% of 29 total passages). These passages contain 7 inline citations (18.9% of 37 in the article). Generated with the Veracity user script. MCE89 (talk) 05:48, 1 February 2026 (UTC)
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| It was the first indoor swap meet in Southern California. | |||||
| 1 | c | latimes.com | web.archive.org | ||
| By 1987, the building had 300 vendors, 60% of which were owned by Koreans, selling a range of products and foods. | |||||
| 3 | b | latimes.com | |||
| Kim was a fan of classical music and needed his daughter to help him understand the English used in gangsta rap songs, but he liked selling records of the genre. | |||||
| 2 | c | npr.org | web.archive.org | Strictly speaking I think the source suggests that this should say daughters plural | |
| 1 | h | latimes.com | web.archive.org | ||
| The vendor carried artists such as Ice Cube and Eazy-E, who formed the group N.W.A. | |||||
| 2 | d | npr.org | web.archive.org | ||
| In the 1990s, the demographics of Compton shifted to have fewer Black people, and gangsta rap gained worldwide popularity. Cycadelic Records continued to sell music to people from across Southern California. | |||||
| 1 | k | latimes.com | web.archive.org | ||
| Lamar featured the Compton Swap Meet building in his 2015 music video for "King Kunta", alongside other Compton locations. The video briefly shows Lamar dancing on the roof of the building. | |||||
| 7 | e | latimes.com | web.archive.org | ||