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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Vrand004. Peer reviewers: Asanc382.

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Great work on the progress you have made so far. I feel that you should use more references. For example, if you got your examples from a source you should cite it. Also, in the last sentence ,in the second paragraph, you should have a semi colon before the word "while" because the use of too many commas is confusing. Asanc382 (talk) 14:06, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Reply