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Latest comment: 3 years ago by 2603:6010:C001:9641:D97C:9271:27D2:89D in topic Spectrum internet

I'll work on adding citations soon. I'm just trying to get my main points down first while I've got them on my mind.

Kostad (talk) 05:46, 6 December 2009 (UTC)Reply



I've started adding citations to this article.

Kostad (talk) 04:45, 8 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

some thoughts

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An excellent start... but it reads too much like an essay one would write up for an education class, and not an encyclopedia article. For example, In several cases, you present information using words like "it is important that..." This may be true, but the reader needs to know who says it is important. The reader also needs to know if anyone disagrees. Blueboar (talk) 17:55, 19 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Rename and rewrite the article

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Form my point of view the scope of the article is too narrrow and the text is not up-to-date. I would propose to rename the article into "educational feedback" (it is not always "corrective") and recommend to start with the works of John Hattie to make the article more concise.

Sorry, I am not fluent in English - so I cannot contribute so far. --Tylerol (talk) 14:59, 7 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

Spectrum internet

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I've had spectrum for a long time but I got rid of the cable because it was the same shows over&over. Now the internet don't work sometimes.it always seems to happen in the middle of a good movie. I don't get it. Why does it do that? I sometimes have to wait the whole day for it to fix. I feel like I should get a discount or something. 2603:6010:C001:9641:D97C:9271:27D2:89D (talk) 05:34, 16 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Incomplete sentences

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Best practice of feedback in the workplace consist of Objective as possible...

That's not a fully formed sentence.