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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Jeus of the Birds in topic General tone and clarifications

General tone and clarifications

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1. Some clarification, please:

> The image can be found in art and merchandise all over.


All over where? Not sure exactly what the original author meant with this, and would appreciate a less vague statement here. Jeus of the Birds (talk) 18:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply


2. To more seasoned editors, forgive me if this is irrelevant/not a problem:

The tone sounds pretty informal, with a lot of "you" (among other things)-- especially within the recipe. Any way to reformat the recipe to sound... less casual (I guess)?. There also are a couple of capitalization errors in the recipe, but I'm not touching it due to my aforementioned dilemma of reformatting it. Jeus of the Birds (talk) 18:10, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply