Talk:Cognilize

Edit request: reframe lead sentence (COI disclosure)

Conflict of interest disclosure: I am a co-founder of Cognilize. I am not editing the article directly and am requesting that an uninvolved editor review the change below. I have no financial arrangement to edit Wikipedia. Requested change (lead sentence): Change: :"Cognilize is a German virtual reality software developer best known for creating sports training simulation systems." To: :"Cognilize is a German software company that develops cognitive training technology, best known for its virtual reality sports training applications." Rationale: The change is a precision/neutrality improvement, not a removal of sourced content. The company's product is cognitive/decision-making training that is delivered through virtual reality; "virtual reality software" describes the medium rather than the function. The sources already cited in the article, and additional independent coverage, characterise the product as cognitive and decision-making training. The proposed wording retains every sourced fact — German origin, VR, sports, training, and the "best known for" emphasis on the football applications — while describing the company's category more accurately. No facts are added or deleted. Cobalt Wren (talk) 22:47, 28 June 2026 (UTC)

You will have to provide sources too for backing your information. Chronos.Zx (talk) 03:39, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you. Independent reliable sources describe the product as cognitive / decision-making training, not only as generic VR software. For example:

• Bleacher Report characterises the program around AI-based game simulations and "quick decision-making" (https://bleacherreport.com/articles/10139675-nfl-rumors-jayden-daniels-using-ai-program-to-help-with-quick-decision-making).
• Radio New Zealand describes it as a German VR simulator providing "immersive decision-making training" (https://www.rnz.co.nz/news/sport/540001/how-virtual-reality-is-training-one-of-the-nfl-s-newest-stars).
• ClutchPoints describes it as a VR-style simulator providing "immersive decision-making training" designed to enhance an athlete's cognitive skills (https://clutchpoints.com/nfl/washington-commanders/commanders-news-jayden-daniels-secret-weapon-commanders-hot-start).

These support describing the company as developing cognitive/decision-making training technology delivered via VR, which is the basis for the proposed lead. The wording retains the VR and sports facts and adds nothing unsourced. ~2026-37332-49 (talk) 05:26, 29 June 2026 (UTC)