Talk:Christine Nelson
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| Christine Nelson has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 28, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
- Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
- It's Late → "It's Late" (all uses)
- That's about it here.
- All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:24, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Concept and casting
[edit]- Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
- "Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
- All fixed - I've made it "Speaking of the filming". to make it more clear. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:26, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Characterization
[edit]- "father may had" → "father may have"
- Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:27, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Role in Degrassi
[edit]- Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
- Remove the comma after "were a baby".
- There's a word missing between "by parents".
- "withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
- Is "day care" two words in British English?
- "which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"
- All fixed. I also just put "daycare" as one word. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Novelization
[edit]- "based from" doesn't sound right.
- Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
- Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Reception and impact
[edit]- "story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
- "14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
- Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
- "for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"
- All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
References
[edit]- The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:
- ==References==
- ===Citations===
- ===Episodes===
- ===Sources===
- Done. I didn't think of making subsections! ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
- ==References==
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